One thing I learned about you is that you are from a farm. My family is similar to yours because my grandma was always baking when I went to her house. The best thing about your video is the pictures of your family. The only suggestion I have would be to add music. It looks great!
I learned that you grew up on a farm. Your family is different than mine because you have children. The best thing about your digital story is that the font seems to fit perfectly. One thing you could change is that on some of the slides the words go to quickly to read.
I loved it Patty! Keep up the work! Just add a few more pictures and a song! One thing I learned about you is you are from a farm! One thing we have in common is catching fireflies! The pictures really make your story! Keep adding! The only thing I would change is to add a song and a few more pictures and you are set! Good Job!
One thing I learned about you is you played softball. Your family is similar than mine because I was raised by a single mother. The best thing about your digital story is the picture each one tells a story by itself. Can't wait to see it the more pictures and music!!
Patty I had no idea you played softball! I actually just watched your final draft video to and it was perfect! i absolutely loved it! I loved the pictures (: great job patty!
One thing I learned about you is that you are from a farm. My family is similar to yours because my grandma was always baking when I went to her house. The best thing about your video is the pictures of your family. The only suggestion I have would be to add music. It looks great!
ReplyDeleteI learned that you grew up on a farm. Your family is different than mine because you have children. The best thing about your digital story is that the font seems to fit perfectly. One thing you could change is that on some of the slides the words go to quickly to read.
ReplyDeleteI loved it Patty! Keep up the work! Just add a few more pictures and a song! One thing I learned about you is you are from a farm! One thing we have in common is catching fireflies! The pictures really make your story! Keep adding! The only thing I would change is to add a song and a few more pictures and you are set! Good Job!
ReplyDeleteOne thing I learned about you is you played softball. Your family is similar than mine because I was raised by a single mother. The best thing about your digital story is the picture each one tells a story by itself. Can't wait to see it the more pictures and music!!
ReplyDeletePatty I had no idea you played softball! I actually just watched your final draft video to and it was perfect! i absolutely loved it! I loved the pictures (: great job patty!
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